I was playing around with the writing tools, AI Tools, in the latest release of MacOS iOS 18.1. I can say this is going to give teachers headaches and fits. Especially English and History teachers that assign writing papers.
I took the post I made about taking a blood pressure and had the writing tools rewrite it. Here it is.
The next four parts are the original and when I used the writing tools included with 18.1 AI.
Original
As it was taught back in the dark ages, the most accurate BP would be taken in the left upper arm at the level of the heart with the patient at a sitting or supine position. We now have the wrist BP cuff and they have proven to be accurate if used as directed with the BP Cuff on the left wrist and held over the heart.
Also the most accurate BP reading is taken after the person has sat or laid down for at least a few minutes. Taking a BP right after someone walks from the waiting area to a treatment room and immediately taking a BP reading can give a false reading especially if the patient is anxious or scared of the visit.
Friendly
Back in the day, they used to take the most accurate BP reading in the left upper arm, right below the heart, with the patient sitting or lying down. But now, we have wrist BP cuffs, and they’re pretty accurate if you use them correctly. Just put the cuff on your left wrist and hold it over your heart.
Also, the best time to take a BP reading is after the person has been sitting or lying down for a few minutes. Taking a BP right after someone walks from the waiting area to a treatment room can give a false reading, especially if they’re feeling anxious or scared.
Professional
Historically, the most accurate blood pressure (BP) measurement was taken in the left upper arm, at the level of the heart, with the patient seated or supine. However, with the advent of wrist BP cuffs, these cuffs have demonstrated accuracy when used as directed, with the cuff placed on the left wrist and held over the heart.
Furthermore, it is crucial to note that the most accurate BP reading is obtained after the patient has had a few minutes to sit or lie down. Taking a BP immediately after a patient has walked from a waiting area to a treatment room can yield inaccurate results, particularly if the patient is anxious or fearful about the visit.
Concise
The most accurate blood pressure reading is taken in the left upper arm at the heart level, either sitting or supine. The wrist blood pressure cuff is also accurate if used as directed, with the cuff on the left wrist and over the heart.
Wait a few minutes after sitting or lying down before taking a reading. A reading immediately after someone walks from a waiting area to a treatment room can give a false reading, especially if the patient is anxious or scared.
This is not just for the English speaker but It will be for just about any language. I haven't tried to have the Mac translate it into another language but I bet that will be coming.
AI is now and here are three examples
1Facts do not cease to exist because they are ignored.-Huxley
"We can have democracy in this country, or we can have great wealth concentrated in the hands of a few, but we can't have both." ~ Louis Brandeis,
"We can have democracy in this country, or we can have great wealth concentrated in the hands of a few, but we can't have both." ~ Louis Brandeis,